works from 
participants at Haiku Workshop
suggestions for editing. We also had a great discussion upon some haiku above…
The following are works by participants:
Works by Jenny Chen:
tip of my tongue
little droplets
in the air
bitterness, solitude
droplets
twinkling on my skin
sprouting up
to my knees
to the trees
little one
one amongst
the crowd
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work by Ryan Gibbs:
autumn wind bends
cranberry twigs
hanging water drops
work by Zain:
glistening cranberries
in prime
unpicked and forgotten
works by Ireme
he loves me
he loves me not
oh, rats!
autumn already?
lonely cranberries
morning dew
oh my computer
virus galore
childhood…not the same
works by Ishrat
reflection of light
on dew
antumn cranberries
the white landscape
moving with me
endless
works by Elizabeth
summer red berry
raindrops
hold the light
spreading petals
ready to break anchor
and fly
works by Surjeet
leafless tree
still holds the fruit
among late winds
soft petals
the expression
of a baby’s smile
the white landscape
moving with me
gathering memories
works by Susan
the white landscape
moving with me
a full moon
standing in shade
between you and me
a long history
on my computer
my son’s homework done
childhood… not the same
Works by Lynn
toboggan races downhill
the white landscape
moving with me
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on the computer
playing games
childhood not the same
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standing in shade
tall trees sway
between you and me
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cranberry in rain
soon to fall
a twig remains
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flower opens
a pink sun
rooting in earth
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fish out of water
ants line up
picnic lunch
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Works by Vino
Fireflies flutter
The night stage
in harmony with stars
Bitter red
ripe
with taste
Works by Josh (young boy)
gentle summer breeze
blowing up sand
a camel walks by
little pink flower
in green grass
a butterfly lands
works by Caryl
petals
gathering warmth from the sun
he loves me not
standing in shade
shadows gather
between you and me
and one from volunteer:
i am a volunteer
helping with this great workshop
sadly but for once
works from Terry Barker
the white landscape
moving in my mind
train stopped
standing in shade
the horse rests
i wish i could
between you and me
a vast gulf
let’s bridge it
cornflower
spreading its wings
fly away